On the first page of the chapter entitled "What Happened in the Night," Murakami uses longer sentences to describe the sinister, almost unearthly, setting or atmosphere. Although the structure of the sentences is not much different from the short ones, these two below are much richer in literary devices -- some of which are personification, onomatopoeia, sound, visual imagery, and simile.
"The evergreen oak looked almost annoyed as it trembled in the occasional puff of the wind with an unpleasant creaking sound. The stones in the garden looked whiter and smoother than they ordinarily did, staring up at the sky impassively like the faces of dead people" (355).
The setting here is creepily eerie, like in a nightmare where one observes, unable to move. The oak is personified as "annoyed," giving it a human trait. The word "creaking" could be onomatopoeia, standing out in the silence of nighttime. It is as if wandering through a graveyard, with stones taking the shape of white long gone faces, the smoothness and whiteness reminding one of bones. They are personified as "staring," having no emotions at all, appearing apathetic. Then there is not to forget the wind, which brings about nocturnal noises.
The reader is very much drawn into this setting because it is so vivid and though surreal, weirdly familiar; in the dark anything is possible to take shape. In addition, I noticed that giving animate objects human traits also stirs ones imagination and endows the scene with a sense of being overpowered by something supernatural (reinforced by the moonlight). It also foreshadows danger and fright, especially when the boy (young Cinnamon) hears the cry of the wind-up bird.
Is there a setting that you liked?
"The evergreen oak looked almost annoyed as it trembled in the occasional puff of the wind with an unpleasant creaking sound. The stones in the garden looked whiter and smoother than they ordinarily did, staring up at the sky impassively like the faces of dead people" (355).
The setting here is creepily eerie, like in a nightmare where one observes, unable to move. The oak is personified as "annoyed," giving it a human trait. The word "creaking" could be onomatopoeia, standing out in the silence of nighttime. It is as if wandering through a graveyard, with stones taking the shape of white long gone faces, the smoothness and whiteness reminding one of bones. They are personified as "staring," having no emotions at all, appearing apathetic. Then there is not to forget the wind, which brings about nocturnal noises.
The reader is very much drawn into this setting because it is so vivid and though surreal, weirdly familiar; in the dark anything is possible to take shape. In addition, I noticed that giving animate objects human traits also stirs ones imagination and endows the scene with a sense of being overpowered by something supernatural (reinforced by the moonlight). It also foreshadows danger and fright, especially when the boy (young Cinnamon) hears the cry of the wind-up bird.
Is there a setting that you liked?
