I have been enjoying The Wind-Up Bird Chronicle so far, although I think it's very strange. Toru Okada, who seems to be a very normal and rather monotone person who doesn't really have any interesting things happen to him, suddenly starts meeting the strangest people like Malta and Creta Kano, May Kasahara, then getting phone calls from the strange woman. He seems to go along with everything without thinking that anything is too weird; being set up with Malta Kano by his wife about the cat, going on a job with May Kasahara, etc. Book One seems like an introduction to something important and definite that will change Toru's life in Book Two and Book Three. Already the first sentence of Book Two shows us that something has changed in the plot, "Kumiko never came back that night." A short sentence that carries a sense of foreboding. Immediately the reader assumes, just like Toru, that Kumiko has left him for another man. There were foreshadowings in Book One to suggest the same thing; the expensive cologne she avoided talking about, the fact that she had been coming in late recently and that she had been having mood swings, all gave the readers an idea that Kumiko was perhaps hiding something. In Book Two, when Toru finds out that Kumiko never came back that night, he has a sense of helplesness that overwhelms him and frustrates the reader. His general reactions seem too neutral and nonchalant for someone who's wife seems to have just left and annoyed me. After searching the house, he even says, "There was nothing more for me to do." as if the situation is completely out of his hands. He makes breakfast and realizes that it is the first time in years that he had eaten breakfast alone, since both he an Kumiko usually made an effort to have breakfast together. The way Kumiko has run off seems strange however, because she doesn't take any clothes with her (which Toru states are very important to Kumiko) and she doesn't go to work that day, which hints that it may not be just a simple case of Kumiko running off with another man. It seems that she has disappeared. Only after he checks if she has taken any clothes with her, does Toru consider the possibility that she might have had an accident or something might have happened to her, but he discards them as unlikely.
Afterwards, Toru gets a phone call from Malta Kano about the cat (which he had completely forgotten about) and then she asks him if there's something else she can help him with, which is when Toru tells her that he thinks Kumiko has left him. The response he receives from Malta Kano give the reader the impression that she knows more than she tells Toru about the entire affair. That's when he asks her impatiently to give her "concrete facts", something that he can "see and touch" and not just vague responses, so Malta Kano tells him to wait for a phone call from someone who's name begins with O. Phone calls have a significant meaning in this novel, right from the very beginning when Toru gets the phone call from the strange woman, and just like Toru tells Malta Kano, "Waiting for a phone call is all I've been doing."
Murakami seems to like to distract the reader in the middle of passages with random events. For example, right after Toru asks Malta Kano for "concrete facts" he says he can hear something falling through the phone; "something not very heavy - perhaps a single pearl - dropping onto a wooden floor. This was followed by a rubbing sound, as if a piece of tracing paper was being held in someone's fingertips and given a vigorous yank." The sound doesn't seem to be very important, just something that Toru hears in the background through the phone with Malta Kano, but Murakami adds it anyway with a lot of detail, perhaps to give a more realistic effect, but it could also be something significant later on. Do these descriptions really add anything to the story? They just seem to distract the reader before Murakami continues with the story.
Afterwards, Toru gets a phone call from Malta Kano about the cat (which he had completely forgotten about) and then she asks him if there's something else she can help him with, which is when Toru tells her that he thinks Kumiko has left him. The response he receives from Malta Kano give the reader the impression that she knows more than she tells Toru about the entire affair. That's when he asks her impatiently to give her "concrete facts", something that he can "see and touch" and not just vague responses, so Malta Kano tells him to wait for a phone call from someone who's name begins with O. Phone calls have a significant meaning in this novel, right from the very beginning when Toru gets the phone call from the strange woman, and just like Toru tells Malta Kano, "Waiting for a phone call is all I've been doing."
Murakami seems to like to distract the reader in the middle of passages with random events. For example, right after Toru asks Malta Kano for "concrete facts" he says he can hear something falling through the phone; "something not very heavy - perhaps a single pearl - dropping onto a wooden floor. This was followed by a rubbing sound, as if a piece of tracing paper was being held in someone's fingertips and given a vigorous yank." The sound doesn't seem to be very important, just something that Toru hears in the background through the phone with Malta Kano, but Murakami adds it anyway with a lot of detail, perhaps to give a more realistic effect, but it could also be something significant later on. Do these descriptions really add anything to the story? They just seem to distract the reader before Murakami continues with the story.
Thanks for these comments, Arri... I agree that Toru is kind of monotone as a character (bit like Anton?), and he is annoyingly passive, but in some ways he's a stereotypically gentle, ordinary Japanese guy readers can probably relate to - Mr Ordinary, and this creates an effective contrast with the weird events and people he encounters. Also, I think in some ways he's a non-conformist because he doesn't want to just be swallowed by a boring job that has no point, and so he accepts to be a 'house-husband' doing all the domestic chores and listening to classical music on the radio. You can see that his wife might find him a little boring though. Comfortable, but boring. I agree that there are many hints of her dissatisfaction with him ... But it's also hard to leave someone who hasn't done anything wrong. Of course, we don't know yet what happened to her. I do LIKE Toru though, because his thoughts are not boring. I especially like how he describes the abandoned house and garden, and the way he focuses in on tiny details, like May's ear, or the stone bird, the smell of a rain-soaked garden, the people in the passing helicopter, the bubbles in Malta Kano's glass of tonic... Of course, this is Murakami's mind we are accessing via Toru, and I love it. It gives me the feeling that people who might appear boring and conventional on the surface might be thinking extraordinary thoughts - the life of the mind. This is a place where ANYTHING can happen.
ReplyDeleteOh, and I forgot to say that - yes - Murakami does 'play' with his readers by delaying the next part of the story or going off on mysterious tangents. I think this is part of the 'art' of storytelling. A writer must weave a spell, must beguile and entertain, or we won't follow along. Suspense is the first requirement in the creation of narrative. This is probably why Creta disappears from the living room while Toru is making coffee, and why Mr Mamiya decides to leave to catch the bus at the climax of the story, and why there are so many odd distracting details. It also occurs to me that life is full of clutter, sounds, impressions, thoughts - and we don't know which ones will be significant and which are just random...
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